murphy clamrod –

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  1. Got a Beat vibe to this, which I dig. Formatting in quatrains felt a little pedestrian, esp given the content and tone. (Nicely stepped in the first stanza though). Grit, yeah, but gimme some GRIT grit, y’know? Like it though, sure

  2. Like the Beat vibe you got here. Formatting in quatrains feels a little pedestrian though, esp given the tone/theme (bar the first stanza which is stepped nicely). Grit, yeah, but gimme some GRIT grit, y’know? I like it though, sure

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